consequence

Nov 27 2006  | Views 1269 |  Comments  (9)
ran into her by accident, or maybe its fate. She looked exactly the same, even after all these years,... Expand

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  manish22d posted 2 yrs ago

Hey hey...no wonder a wise man always carries a condom in his wallet:)



  Nargis Natarajan posted 2 yrs ago

Cyco.....like Ekta says, it does hold a teasing message. But it was also a very cruel act on the part of the girl especially since it was intentionally done. A story that should create awareness. Especially in these times. Nice one! 



  cyco posted 2 yrs ago

Thank you all Very much for your comment.s Actually I did miss a paragraph when i did a cut and paste, maybe I should proof read it after I blog it I guess. Well I don't want to change it now since most of you had already read it. I very much appericiate your input.





  Jaikrit Kandari posted 2 yrs ago

The plot seems to be in place. The description is very good at places.
However there is space for editing, I/he are getting mixed up.
Also the meeting after years and then the physical intimacy at the end seem abrupt as if missing a paragraph.
The end though comes out neat and shocking.
Why the title consequence?



  lavchary23 posted 2 yrs ago

This was a nice story and very well written.
 



  highspirit posted 2 yrs ago

As a story its well written. Background vividly written ...turning point was that he happend to met her,the climax too well written .But 'am unable to find the build up to the climax ..was it missed out intentionally...? life is filled with suspense...what,when,whys,hows of the turn of events unpredictable...despite she was able to handle guys smartly ,how did she end up with HIV+ve...Thats life. I am not bothered about the guy getting infected with hiv+ve...may be she had expressed her anger and revenge against him by inviting him home...that gain her human personality is brought out well...I am not getting annoyed with her at all...neither of that guy...I am concerned of her only...Well written,congrats.



  cordite posted 2 yrs ago

what do i say? i dont have words................its amazing
 
cordite



  ektabhandari posted 2 yrs ago

a nice write-up....
with a good tease of message



  abhisarika posted 2 yrs ago

Good one Cyco. Guyz whoz interested in the body will certainly end up in this type of situations/consequence.





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